various haiku I just found on the machine…
August 19, 2010 § 2 Comments
July sun on my neck —
grinding of the coffee roaster
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fourth of July —
wasp explores the flag
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July rain
drying my hair in it
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again
the summer rain
again
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pulling back the left sleeve of my shirt —
five minutes since last time
Patti, I LOVE the effect of the mutated repetitions here, the sense of time passing and the same things happening over and over but in a slightly different way each time — this captures a certain mood perfectly.
Thanks, Melissa! And thanks for this blog’s very first link 🙂