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October 26, 2010 § 3 Comments
can’t avoid the dead leaves on the street
Tagged: fall, haiku, leaves, poem, poetry
I really like the ambiguity caused by the way you’ve split these lines up.
Thanks! Putting a break there seemed physically necessary somehow.
[…] I really like the ambiguity caused by the way Patti Niehoff of A Night Kitchen has split up the lines in her autumn (Halloween?) themed poem “can’t avoid.“ […]
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I really like the ambiguity caused by the way you’ve split these lines up.
Thanks! Putting a break there seemed physically necessary somehow.
[…] I really like the ambiguity caused by the way Patti Niehoff of A Night Kitchen has split up the lines in her autumn (Halloween?) themed poem “can’t avoid.“ […]